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poem: early summer h’ku

eyes closed
bright warmth

light breeze
tousled hair

crackling wicker
distant train

An early summer day provides a feast for the senses, relaxing on the back porch.

(What’s a “h’ku”, you say? See my previous h’ku style poems here and here.)

  1. July 7, 2008 at 11:29 pm | #1

    Very nice concentrated images, very evocative

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